And My Rhyme Ain't Done.....  

Posted by IVF Land on Surrogacy World in ,

Here is my announcement Rhyme, but it's not yet finished and needs some help - plus it's not really a rhyme.
Let me know how we can make it better.

This is your normal story about a boy and a girl, their surrogate, and their other surrogate. Okay, maybe not so normal, but it is a story.

This is unconventional. It must be wrong.
But, give us some time to sing you our song.

The peasants have their pitchforks ready, with fear in their eyes,
warning of danger and problems that might arise, with a sigh.

But the stories just starting - it's calm and it's clear,
So, go get your popcorn and let's gather right here.

Our Journey begins with a Boy and a Girl, it's simple you see, since baby makes three.
Except there's a problem that we must confess - the infertility bug makes life a mess.

Our goal is a family that is large and happy,
We need support to make the boy a pappi.

They will go anywhere in the world for a baby in hand,
If your not infertile, you can't understand.

The search is on for the perfect Surro,
Even if they need to pay her in Euro's.

The perfect Surro, does she exist?
We look at the tooth fairy and St. Nick, you get the gist.

We look to fertility goddesses to guide us on our way
Ajysyt and Isis are chosen and they are here to stay.


St. Nick will soon be there. He goes off in the night with no baby in sight.

If you are new your scratching your head
the village idiots just need to go to bed.

Ajysyt and Isis are the heart of this rhyme.
With them on the team there'll be a baby this time.

This entry was posted on Sunday, August 24, 2008 at 10:20 AM and is filed under , . You can follow any responses to this entry through the comments feed .

2 comments

Is it just me or do you stop reading and just start laughing when you read the word "pappi"

August 25, 2008 at 10:28 PM

I didn't stop reading...but I did have to giggle!

August 28, 2008 at 3:51 PM

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